The year is 2032. This
is the City, centre of world politics.
In Leon’s experience, it came down to who you could trust. The
City’s intelligence organisation, run by the Tin Man, had been compromised, to
what level he couldn’t say.
His own organisation may have been compromised too. And it
made him feel like the Tin Man to admit that, to make the decision to go alone.
Teams were key, teams provided balance.
Scarecrow had located Dorothy, he had bugged the vehicles at
the original location, but he hadn’t reported in since and there were dangerous
men in the City. Playing pieces not usually on the board. Leon feared the
worse.
Leon had followed one of Scarecrow’s trackers to this
warehouse. He soothed the building’s security network, kept it calm, wrapped it
around him like a warm blanket. It wouldn’t tell on him, he was its invisible
friend, its secret.
He nearly tripped over the first body, concealed in the
shadows behind a fuel reserve.
The corpse wasn’t local security caught in the wrong place
at the wrong time; it was a mercenary, hired by the enemy, which meant there
was someone else here. Leon asked gentle questions of the security, not wanting
to push their friendship too far. But all he got back was a ghost, as if he had
cast a shadow into his own future. A shadow with wetwork skills.
He found another two guards on the way up to the roof. Their
uplinks were still feeding active data, a video loop of a patrol pattern, a
heartbeat that no longer existed. It was high level stuff, but the internal
security must be skeletal to miss this trick. Or distracted.
The next body was tucked in a corner on the rooftop. Not
dead, but breathing raggedly, on the edge of consciousness, on the precipice of
death. He recognised the face beneath the black streaks of masking make-up.
“Scarecrow.”
“Hey, Boss.”
****
Dorothy blinked. Everything was blurred, everything felt out
of sync. She remembered shadows, dreams and ghosts. Bloodshed and bloodlust. A
darkness nesting in her soul.
The bright lights shimmered above her, painful, piercing.
Her head felt as if it had been cracked open and driven through with nails.
Her last clear thought was the General in front of her, on
his knees. Then, nothing, a long night full of demons. Someone was looking down
at her. She tried to move, she was lying flat, straps at her arms and legs, a
firm cushion beneath her.
She blinked rapidly, trying to focus.
“She’s waking. Well done, Doctor, it seems you succeeded on
both counts. You really are a wizard.”
Dorothy knew that voice, she had hunted that voice for
years.
“General.” She managed to slur as her vision swam and
cleared.
And there he was, looking down at her, head bandaged, but
smiling horribly.
“Siberian, come and say hello.”
The Siberian. She had heard rumours of the General’s
shadowy, left-hand man.
Another figure stepped into her vision. Dark eyes gazed
coldly down at her from a face she recognised.
“No,” she choked.
He smiled, baring his teeth. It was not pleasant.
Sorry if I'm being dense but I'm a bit confused by the last line. It feels like its a cool reveal moment...but I don't get the significance.
ReplyDeleteWas that not your intent? Am I being a (lovable) fool?
I smiled at the line "...you really are a wizard."
Woops... was too subtle on that one...
Delete4th paragraph - http://xeroverse.blogspot.com/2011/12/dorothy-delusion-part-5.html
Wonder if that's because it's a serial and brief mentions are easily forgotten, or if it was just way too subtle. =s
Let's make that a link
DeleteA little subtle, yes, especially in a series like this. But that means… Simon is working with the General?
DeleteI think I was trying to be too clever, and made it too obtuse because I was afraid people would get it too easily... Simon is the Siberian (tiger), thought to be extinct...
DeleteWriting serials was supposed to be a learning process, and I'm still learning right up to the end! =)
Aha! I suspect this is a personal taste thing but for a serial that was a bit too subtle (for me at least!) as it was referenced in one line. If we had met Simon and had a scene with him then I think I'd have made more of a connection.
ReplyDeleteStill, a neat twist now I've caught up.
More great action, it looks like Leon is on his way to meet someone he doesn't expect to see too.
ReplyDeleteThe way Leon surfs the security system is really cool.
Thank you, Steve. =)
DeleteI like the way you captured the security forces who had been compromised on the way in. Intriguing reveal at the end. It'll be fun to learn what led the Siberian to make this choice.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Aidan. =)
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